Wednesday, March 30, 2011

THE DAY I DIE!!!!

The day i die , don't cry
Because i don't want your world to dry
The day i die., don't shed a tear
Because whenever you'll look for me I'll be there
The day i die, my heartbeat would stop
But my mind would think of you to the top
The day i die, you might not be able to see me
But my soul will fly around you like a bee
The day i die,you might get sad
But I'll ask god to keep you always glad
The day i die, i would love to look at you
And keep looking at you like a statue
The day i die, its not gonna be an end
I would still fight from god to save you and defend



This is my 1st self composed poem
Although short , but as my 1st post said . There's always a Beginning 
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5 comments:

  1. hey dis is an ausum poem ....
    i thnk tht u should pe a POET ..
    keep up the gud wrk
    reallly nyc ...
    SPEECESS yaar :

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  2. hope that my mind n heart go in d same direction when i write poems..
    thnx alot bhai ..

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  3. Welcome to the blog world! It's a great effort, as u wrote it's ur first poem.

    Keep it up!

    RESTLESS

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  4. thnx a lot .. m trying my best to write more poems . to entertain all .

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  5. lovely poem bro.
    god bless u.
    keep on writing and keep on giving us an exhibition of ur emotions!

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